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I'm sorry but I really don't see anything particularly sparkling or brilliant about this creation. It is obvious that there is something great about this due to all of the 10/10 and 9/10 but myself - Its a good idea but things could have been sped up a little.

I understand that you are only a beginner at Flash and that is why it is great for us to constructively criticise your production. First thing I would do is avoid seperating the lines like on her leg in the dream, this brings the viewer back into reality, and provoked me to think about the tools used to create the program. keeping the atmosphere is a very important aspect of almost all productions.

Speeding things up a little also keeps the viewer interested, I was finding myself almost hitting the exit button at some points due to the lack of motion.

The story line can go very far. I have not looked into this series much and so have not the slightest idea weather or not you have sequels (which would prosumeably render this comment useless-.-) but as for this flash: Good idea, but not presented as well as it could have been.

crystalpencil responds:

Looking at this today I do see lots of sore spots, this I know. I havent posted since this submission because Ive been utilizing the constructive criticisms. My next submission should be worlds apart in terms of technique.

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