S-A-S-S-Y's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PAIN: Angel]

haha great.

I really enjoyed this animation. the art style, the music, the atmosphere created was amazing and I hope to see alot more flash cartoons done in this style.

of course, I have a few things to criticise(even the greatest productions can have flaws). There could have been a fight between the angel and the creature, although the way it was done was great, it could have been a little more involved.

As for length, this kind of film is great, short but smooth and left me smirking at the 3 word punchline at the end. I will take a look at your other vids also, great work keep it up.

[ATU:Delusions of Grandeur]

Sorry.

I'm sorry but I really don't see anything particularly sparkling or brilliant about this creation. It is obvious that there is something great about this due to all of the 10/10 and 9/10 but myself - Its a good idea but things could have been sped up a little.

I understand that you are only a beginner at Flash and that is why it is great for us to constructively criticise your production. First thing I would do is avoid seperating the lines like on her leg in the dream, this brings the viewer back into reality, and provoked me to think about the tools used to create the program. keeping the atmosphere is a very important aspect of almost all productions.

Speeding things up a little also keeps the viewer interested, I was finding myself almost hitting the exit button at some points due to the lack of motion.

The story line can go very far. I have not looked into this series much and so have not the slightest idea weather or not you have sequels (which would prosumeably render this comment useless-.-) but as for this flash: Good idea, but not presented as well as it could have been.

crystalpencil responds:

Looking at this today I do see lots of sore spots, this I know. I havent posted since this submission because Ive been utilizing the constructive criticisms. My next submission should be worlds apart in terms of technique.

[Red Riding Hood]

Simply the best.

That was epic. the maniacal laugh scene sent a chill down my spine, and the story was verbalised in such a classic manner that with the aid of the visuals I felt like I was within this amazing tale! This is definately the best animation I have found on Newgrounds and will spread the word of its excellance.

Good luck anybody trying to reproduce a fairytale with such perfection, I doubt you will succeed in surpassing the brilliance of this creation, but if you do; you are a god.

Those of you saying that those episodes of blood and pointless gore which flood the internet from Flash these days could beat this masterpiece, take a look at your self and eventually you may realise just how pathetic you are.

[The Composer]

Not bad.

I did not find anything particularly scintillating about this creation. It has a nice storyline, and the troubles of being a composer are well depicted in the decrepit state of his life.

Although the graphics were very well made, I found that the sound track to cut off a bit fast between scenes and the movements of the characters could have been a little more smooth.

Don't get me wrong, I did enjoy watching this film, but there was quite a bit of content that I found could have been improved on.

[Deciduous]

Brrrr

Is it cold in here or are the goosebumps from the film?